Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 26, 2019
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2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Alexie I really like how you hid 12 harts I found all 12 harts it was lots of fun,Maybe next time you could more harts to find and put a telly on the side so we know how many have been hidden so far,But still good job
ReplyDeleteHi Alexie, I liked how you added the hearts and there was one in the cereal. Are you going to continue this or is it finished.
ReplyDeleteNext time fix some of the spelling mistakes, Overall I liked it very much.