Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 17, 2020
DEATH DEER
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Alexie
ReplyDeleteI love your word art. But maybe you could change up the colour a bit
and the font. But I like the way you used cute as one of the words because deer are cute and soft and strong I like your word art it is amazing.
Hi Alexie I really liked your word art it was really integrating and cool. If I had a choice I would make a animal I would make a sloth. Maybe you could teach me how to do word art. Cant wait for your next post.
ReplyDeleteHi Alexie
ReplyDeleteI love this image! You have chosen some really interesting words. You could use some of these in your writing. My only feedback would be to make the image bigger so I can read more of the words you have chosen. I hope you are enjoying learning from home.
hi Alexie, what a lovely piece of word art. I love deer too, their eyes are so beautiful. It's a shame I can't read all of your writing though so perhaps you could make it bigger next time as Mr T mentioned. Have fun learning at home!
ReplyDeleteHello Alexie. you used a really good picture you found. You also found a really good words to use for the deer. I have never really read on done something on deer this got me inserted in deer. Maybe next time you could tell us how fast can a deer really go then we could know that a deer really is fast. Over all really good blog post keep up the good work.
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